After a good amount of reviews, I have beefed up the second version. I kind of like the generic synth at the beginning, though I messed around with the sytrus plugin. I change them up and added more as I went along. I totally revamped the percussion and the classic slow section. My goal was to build at all times. The bass line also got a little heftier. Just a reminder, this is a remix of a 70 year old middle eastern song that I heard in downtown new york at the cupping room, being played by a guy with an electric violin. Hope you like it.