After Particle-X's review, I decided to take his advice and change some stuff around. So, thanks for the support Particle-X and this remix was thanks to your sound advice. I hope you like it !
I added a sidechain for the one of the melodies against the kick, so I could get the full effect of the synth when the kick wasn't on, but not have it overbear the kick when the beat's on.
Added an arpeggiated pad to add to the melody line. You can hear it by itself at 3:24.
Changed the arrangement around a bit to give the chorus more variety.
Added in Automation tracks for volume control during the intro and outro.
Please review and let me know what you think!