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 Carmen Funbere by Faery Child |
| forgot to rate :/
could be a 9/10 project if you really worked on it, i can say you know producing but i'm critiscim about much efforts you dedicate to this track...cheers just take of you, and of your past stuff, revision are the bless of a long term production goal and collection.best to you reviewed on: 2008-03-22 15:32:18 |
| (response from artist) Thanks for your review. This is quite an old track and I've gained much experience since then. I suppose I ought to work more in this genre in the future. ^_^ |
| Carmen Funbere by Faery Child |
| the intro sounds poor, instrument is too simple, look a bit minimal,but classic song structure, now it rise to harmony , your record is relaxing but even if well done , you spent not a lot of time on this track, need more instrument, fx , phat, i think it deserve a 7 if good is song that have a bit music produced ok but not amazing...very coherent structure but it need more sphere in the song reviewed on: 2008-03-22 15:28:13 |
| Drive by Mark Shemel |
| kind lo fi leads intro very fun, this crash/explosion is too, i like bass more than the others intruments, try to make the main lead whistle a bit more that would make groove me more.yes this track is trance but have some electronica song structure technics and few instruments sound a bit too.piano is really good because of the piano i rise my first impression of a 7.5 for a 8 because i really enjoyed the song Mark.Not amazing prod. but a cool record to me, like the end a lot too ! reviewed on: 2008-03-20 04:18:29 |
| (response from artist) If I took the time today that I did back then with the little I had, I think I could be great. But these songs are good to remind us. Thanks bro, like the goa collab u posted. |
| (What I need is) Somebody by Jony |
| love that rythmics, need more phattening, need a clap or noise when coming to vocals or something to introduce like a break, when it comes to leads you may short a bit its enlovellope i think and u'll get it more house yet ! a good pacific house record to relax me that's what it is i think, i like a lot that rozalla vocals samples...i like a lot the original song, the leads fit not with this vocal passage really, something just go a bit disturbing at this moment of the song...just a good song but not awesome as i think you produced it without a very concret idea except making house music reviewed on: 2008-03-18 09:06:48 |
| (response from artist) You're right when you say that drums need more phattening..I should go back to that and adjust it the right way. For the rest,I had my mind set on a different mood while conceiving this track,and I was really looking for something more relaxed and relaxing..And when I came up with that melody then Robin S vocals crossed my mind.The blend may sound more or less convincing,still I like it a lot,and while I reckon it's a lot experimental with different sounds and styles in one single piece,I think I've reached something by getting it done |
| Biomechanic by Empty Magnet |
| 1 member(s) found the following review helpful: a bit darkwave with that pad, vocal looks good for dnb , goes to bass used like pad, more athmospheric than classic song listening.this sample voice come from fruity loops you may be more original and also make the song more solid by adding track with leads. reviewed on: 2008-03-17 10:23:32 |
| Live Life by 100Heros In 2Men , JellyHead ,TaiterNutz |
| beat is very powerfull, i like your sounds, very phat and dynamic, the pad sound a bit harsch in the beggining or very metallic and slow.the beat get a bit monoton and seems like a bit not adapted to some patterns..this is hard to classify in genre, have drum kit from rock, some pads of psytrance, and an ambient song structure, there is an idea in the track but it seems that u didn't pushed it to a totally concret style. reviewed on: 2008-03-16 19:38:26 |
| Seven Weeks a Day by Mark Shemel |
| no review yet...the intro like always is awesome, too much mid high on piano, just use an eq. melody is beatiful and make me think to "the cynic project" "raymond wave" some past internic artist of the 90's that had a bit of success.you should had a chord strike on the end, the outro is bad without a last key, should be pad i think reviewed on: 2008-03-16 17:18:21 |
| (response from artist) that song was a bid for a commercial for Cinemax. I have the submitted version, will put it up later. |
| Crack (Featuring Nico) by Mark Shemel |
| intro is great, a bit to much saturation, horn is too detuned, bass is good, rise up, good, pads are nice and exotic but need eqz, sounds too sharp, leads are sympatics, make me think to my samana original mix way of making a song, i mean set up in track a strong lead waves melody overall the tune.guitar lead is a good idea but it sound very harsch, yes definitivly you don't spent enought time on mastering you sound even if you stuff is well edited and clear to listen, need that masterise and format touch that give your stuff a boost ! reviewed on: 2008-03-16 17:07:18 |
| Open mind by dj storm |
| i don't like the kick with no fade in the intro, the bass is fun, vocals are well mixed, the rymthmics claps are a bit dry, you make hold on , these leads are very light and hyphnotic, delay is very good, a bass attack and chip leads a bit weird and trippy , whisle leads are very nice, and then it pop up to a kind of spinned melody and chill sphere, i get into the groove now...mastering is a bit sharp on the mid high reviewed on: 2008-03-16 14:57:52 |
| (response from artist) Thanks ppd.Cheers |
| Without Reason by Java |
| intro is like "in the mix" dj chained tracks, go up, classic trance feeling, kick is too glowing, i'd liked it more with a higher tune and noise sided sound, the pad idea is good but the instrument sound generic and a bit too poor, try to space it, there's a lack of stereo work in you track, it's seems mono for too many instruments, the trance horn rise is good i like it, breaking in it too, inversed cymbal is a good idea too, 4th octave bass as a couple is nice i like it too...at 4:50 the kick is bad for the break moment, when it come to leads melody it become a bit better but not very nice, attack is too slow.or add more phat/delay.your song is good but not original and a bit too linear, better on dj mix than pure indoor track.mastering is ok to me, eqs are correct to me. reviewed on: 2008-03-16 14:26:02 |
| (response from artist) thank you very much for your review... iŽll work on the mono sounds... iŽll keep on mind all your suggest... once again thank you...;););)....Greetings... Love. Java |
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