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October 13, 2006, Drum 'n' Bass
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latest attempt at jump up track ave been without pc for 6 mths this is first track 4 a while would appreiciate any advice people can offer production wise

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grooki


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Hi buddy. This track was interesting - very weird, because you obviously now something about producing, or music, coz your track has all sorts of bass warps and tweaks and so fort, but at the same time it is very tinny - it sounds like you know what you are doing and wanted to make a sparse, underdeveloped track. The bass i feel needs more presence, it is very thin and kind high - no sub. THe drums are cool but they don't sound unified. Plus no percs under there. Sounds like different samples from all over and nothing has been done to bring em together. Basically if the sounds were more developed this track would be cool. But as it is it is too underdeveloped for me. Keep it up, you got elements, take a bit of time to try and make the elements you have sound a bit more complete. :D grooki

lol you have hosts coming back to haunt you ! jks (Posted on: Nov 2, 2006)
(response from artist) hello m8 thanks 4 the review i agree with what u said and realised that i had used the wrong eq combinator cos i use reason 3 so i will sort it out but to be honest have started to use orion now so hopefully will get a better sound and will concentrate on putting more elements in my music but i find its difficult to know where to draw the line

Rating: 4/10  


brokendrum


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ok, now just quickly in response to bal's comment and your review of his tune...i don't think a one line review is positive criticism. anyways, hewre is some constructive criticism- theres very little structure in your tune, no intro, no chourus and no verses! you always told me to do this and i do, work on structure, its so important. I like some of the bass sounds but think the riff is a little cheesy, get more stomping on it, do a nice 4 bar bass loop, repeat it three times then do a different one with a different riff, then repeat the pattern, think about patterns, and repetition but not too much, switch it up now and again.
The breaks sound a bit eighties and tyhey are very simplistic, if thats the aim then thats cool, but you should fill the spaces left by the break with delayed and reverbed fx, that will make your tune sound fuller. if not then bang loads of breaks in and fill those gaps with percussion.
i don't mean to go on like im some dnb guru because im not, ive just worked very hard in the last year and feel im finally getting somewhere with it all. Finally, i wouldn't be posting tunes up at your stage in production unless you know its an absolute banger, seek criticsm from your peers before you post, the internet can be harsh at its very easy to give up when people don't rate your tunes, in a few years time things will be very different
peace

euan (Posted on: Oct 19, 2006)

Rating: 2/10  


Forshay


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This is a rubbish tune, chris you go round slating everyone elses tunes, and Ive heard everyone you have reviewed (badly), there are some good productions on here, this aint one of em, it must be down to your crusty ears. Fair enough I myself got way to go still, I never big myself up unlike you, so cool out and don't come and slate what I'm trying to do, watch us move and don't try to nudge in. I deserve the scores I get because I work hard and don't want your poorly thought 1 line reviews on my page. Honestly? I rate this tune a 2 for poor. Go back to the drawing board matey. (Posted on: Oct 18, 2006)
(response from artist) geezer i don't go around slaming peoples tunes and i never mean't to come across as if i was slating your tune it was not mean't in no bad way just positive critism i didn't say anything to you that i would not expect you to say too me i think your reation was harsh

Rating: 6/10  


xtorsion


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Alright geeza ......dunno where to start cos it comes right in , probably the beat then ....i dunt like the snare , what i would do to it ?.....cut it in half , its too CHIIIIIIIIIIII , if ya get me , got too much high end freq's , cut it and compress it , normalise it then give it some bass , take the high end freq down a touch , and layer a break behind it , the bdrum dont stand out enough , needs more electro sumin ...maybe a bit of distortion and some compression...the wap wap bass is alright , needs some fx and some modulation tweekin , maybe some phaser so it sits better , theres a wicked lead that you pitch bend , i like that ....also it needs some sound fx in this tune ....the switches are cool ..it does plenty , but you need to give them more variation cos it sounds like its just loopin n shit.....just needs structure and some fx attention , and sort that beat out mate ....x out (Posted on: Oct 15, 2006)
(response from artist) cheers for the advise ave gone back too track and am reworking it hopefully making it better




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